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The Dolphin by Phoebe Bakewell (aged 8)

The dolphin is as blue as the sea
The dolphin is so playful
Looking for prey through the sea
As he rolls along the ocean he touches the rocks
Swimming quickly along
As fast as the current of the wave
Wet like a pool of water
He makes graceful sounds to his friends
His eyes are as black as pen ink
His hunger chases him
He dashes through the water like he has somewhere to go.

My Winter Morning by Jessica Whiteley (aged 8)

It was so quiet that I saw the sun gazing like the moon and all around was like a large white box covered in snow.
It was so rough that I could see my hand rubbing against the fence giving me splinters from the wood.
It was so noisy that the wind was racing in and out of my ear and the tree blowing like a tornado.
It was so peaceful that I saw a slope going down to the flat with the lovely sky like the sea.

Angel Cake by Madhumanti Dey (aged 8)

I think angel cakes
Taste good
But I haven't ever tasted one.

If I had
The problem of my boring old oatmeal
Would be solved and done.

I would feel heavenly, like an angel
That I don't have to eat
That same sliced bagel.

But it's not just about breakfast
It's about something else too
It would be….

A dream come true.

Recipe for a Dragon by Kimberley Cota (aged 8)

Capture breath as fiery as flames burning from a volcano.
Peel the scales from a vicious, angry serpent that has just killed an intruder.
Steal a heart as humble and vicious as lightening to enemies that approach.
Add the wings caught from of a gigantic alien that fly up and spread out.

Grab a tail that flips, curls and swats from the core of a burning sun.
Sharpen claws, turned spikey and metal, stolen from a lion that roars.
Add a head, burning from a bull dunked in thrashing larva.
Press on eyes dazzling like sparklers on bonfire night.

Place on the prickling ears of a monster straining to hear his victims.
Throw round flames that are whirling and dancing like fireworks.
Paint with colours purple, red and green, mixed like dripping paint.
Screw down two spikes to the head, rounded like elephants' tusks.

Stir on a cool day or hot summer's eve,
Then mash the spare body parts together like crushed biscuits.
Let him go free to gallop and fly.
Let him rest in a cave, with the close of an eye.

Winter by Billy Simmons

It was so still that I heard the thundery snowclouds
whip against the pollard trees.
The twirling wind made a massive snow storm.
It was so peaceful that the crumbly snow
made people fall down hills.
Freezing cold leaves made hands freeze.
It was so silent that the trees stood like statues.
It was so silent that the crumbly snow in my hand
was so soft that it was like sand.
It was so calm that the trees stood like statues
in front of the thundery clouds.

The Lion by Joshua Drake

The lion hurtles rapidly
Looking for prey to ambush,
He targets his prey before chasing it.
He watches carefully before taking off like a rocket
He sneaks up on prey while it's not looking,
He keeps his eye on prey while dashing.
Never gives up when prey gets away
He makes his prey surrender before kills,
He whacks his teeth against prey to kill.
Once his prey is dead he eats

My Dog Scamp by Michelle Cobbledick (aged 12)

My dog's name was Scamp
He even bounced on the tramp
He died on my Birthday
I knew it wasn't a happy day

We buried him with a rose
so he is still living
And me?
I still water it with a hose

The Wolf by Lani Bakewell (aged 9)

The wolf's great growl as she ambushes her prey
Jet black fur and focused eyes
Jagged teeth in the cold black forest
Her bristly hairs as sharp as her razor claws
Her dribbling tongue and sharp pointed muzzle
Gnashing jaws as sharp as a blade
She never gives up
Pounce! She attacks
The life of the fox is gone

Frozen Days by Harry Duffield (aged 8)

It was so peaceful that I heard
Silky snow crunch when we walked over it.
Bluely black sky darkened, the sun broke through.
It was so quiet that I felt my frozen hands shaking
on the iced hills.
It was so still that I listened to my heart beating
while the trees swayed slowly.
It was so silent that I heard the wind blow the snow
like an eagle swooping down on its prey.

The Eagle by Diane Clark

The eagle's eager eyes focus,
feeling confident he glides,
with eyes locked on target,
gliding through the trees he's challenged,
his dark feathers darken the sky,
pointy beak as sharp as a knife,
glaring in the distance he shoots down,
the prey is dead in seconds.

The Husky by Lily GoodChild (aged 9)

The husky's jet black fur
Deep growls as it seizes its prey
Coal black wood where it lives
An underground den
The wild animal scanned
As his bright ears hear
Its prey
The husky has bursting white fur like
Glittering snowflakes
The animal's strong grip feet
As it walks on the white
Platform razor sharp jaws
As pointy as the blade
Of a knife
It never gives up
It pounced out and eats it all up

The Bengal Tiger by Reuel Igbokwe (aged 8)

The Bengal Tiger logs onto its victims
Camouflaging itself it launches like a racing car
Targeting its victim it jumps out of nowhere
Its killer sharp fangs devour its victim
The Bengal Tiger is victorious.

One Windy Day by Aidan Shote (aged 9)

One windy day there were trees
There were trees dropping leaves like bombs
With the wind whispering in my ears and a bird
Flying fast as lightning
With its head straight and wings back like
A long spear

The King Cobra by Georgie Furze (aged 8)

The king cobra brilliantly slithers
As if it was like an ice cube on a hill,
Weeping through millions of microscopic grains of sand,
Wiry stringy body,
Sun blazes like a fiery meatball,
It hisses violently like the rapid engine of sports car,
Skidding as it locks its head in to position,
Desperate to eat in the deserted desert,
It ambushes its prey and dislocates its jaws,
It slithers silently as it sheds its soft scaly skin,
It shows its razor colossal jaws,
It kills in a second and in seconds it has done its work.

The Silent Poem by Lani Bakewell (aged 9)

It was so motionless
I could see the clouds slowly move across
The shallow snow
It was so calm
I could see the sun shrouded beneath the clouds
With the dazzling light beams shining
On the swaying trees
It was so peaceful
I could feel the snow slugging on my boots
It was so tranquil
I could see the trees like galloping horses
Clouds like flying dementors

The Leopard by Hermione Gallagher (aged 8)

The leopard stares at its prey
His vicious teeth targeting food
The leopard's roar sounds as
loud as an elephant stamping
His sharp canines chewing on its prey
He quickly sprints ahead in the
peachy sky
He runs before its death.

The Komodo Dragon by Billy Simmons

The Komodo dragon's venomous tongue and spit are dangerous.
Largely he walks along the path
Sensing his prey.
His bladed teeth are invisible.
No animal could take this beast.
He is a walking giant.
The rocky terrain is like the America sky lands.
Deep and frightful.
Its prey surrenders.
He is deadly.

The Cheetah by Jessica Whiteley (aged 8)

The Cheetah is staring at his prey,
The Cheetah is as fast as a rocket,
He sprints because he's eager for his food,
He's as loud as a sports car's violent engine,
His claws are like daggers.

Leopard by Aidan Shote (aged 9)

The leopard charges its prey
Eager to have its lunch on that very day
Eyes locked on its target to get its prey
Blazing hot sun slowing its prey
Blurred grass.
The leopard is ready to jump
And catch its prey
Rips into the body
The prey surrenders
The game is all over and the leopard
Rips into its prey

Winter Wave by Aidan Shote (aged 9)

It was so calm you could hear the
gentle snow falling on to the ground
with the trees swaying in the air.

It was so quiet you could hear birds
jumping in the fresh snow while they
were singing like angels.

It was so silent that the sun
went cold and the snow went thick.

Frozen Icy Days by Reuel Igbokwe

It was so silent that I heard trees whisper to
one another like talking trees.

It was peaceful that I heard trees removing
Their crackly leaves.

It was so quiet that I heard trees whisper to
each other saying, Look he is coming.

It was so calm that I could see the dark
clouds as a cloak looming against the blazing sun.

Updated January 12th 2012

Nature by Zoe D. (aged 9)

Sun, leaves, snow, and flowers
Winter storms and springtime showers
Summer leaves heat as fall leaves color
Seasons change one into another
This is Nature

Bristle, bristle in the trees
Buzz, buzz, all the bees
Way up top and in the sky
Is where the little bluebirds fly
This is Nature

Shimmering lakes and running creeks
Cranes drink the water with very long beaks
From the rivers and into the ocean
Where fish cause quite a commotion
This is Nature

School Bus Fuss by Ricky Robin (aged 10)

I woke up in the morning feeling fresh as a baby
I ate enough breakfast to feed an elephant, maybe?!

On the way to school I heard a loud buzz,
the school bus broke down because the engine
was broke, it was.

The driver called the mechanic, finally!
But he was stuck in traffic… why me?

We were stuck in the bus for an hour or so,
but I'm not complaining, we had less school,
WAY TO GO!

Flowers by Mika Lambert (aged 11)

Roses for me,
Violets for you,
Flowers are awesome,
because they always
BLOSSOM!

Chocolate by Hannah (aged 10) and Taylor W. (aged 8)

Chocolate is so lovely
Honeycomb is sometimes found inside
On and off I eat it a lot
Chocolate is so fantastic
Oh chocolate, oh chocolate
Lovely to the thought, taste and touch
Amazing fantastic chocolate
Taylor W. loves chocolate
Everyday, every moment

Flipperty, Flopperty, Floo! by Francesca Dymock-Budd (aged 9)

Sometimes when you don't know what say
you tend to get shouted at!!

So why not use the new method of saying...
FLIPPERTY, FLOPPERTY, FLOO!!!

WHOOO!!!

Updated 22nd Dec 2011

A Reading Pantoum by Shifa Syedah (aged 9)

Books are so fun to read
They are very enjoyable
Fun ones don't let you stop
All you can't do it drop out of it

They are very enjoyable
You can read all kinds
All you can't do is drop out of it
Don't stop reading, reading is fun

You can read all kinds
Fun ones don't let you stop
Don't stop reading, reading is fun
Books are so fun to read

For lots more pantoums click here!

The Shoe Mouse by Prabhjot Singh (aged 11)

All alone in the house
the shoe was home of the mouse.
In the night it's cozy,
but the day makes it lousy.

No cats come, no dogs chase,
but the mouse rests in his place.
He often brings some food,
but the shoe makes it tasty and good.

The mouse now lives jolly good
in the grand lorry hood.
The shoe adds to his glory,
And this house makes his story.

And now… lots of Year 4 Monster Poems

Monster by Ellie Rice (aged 9)

He is as fat as a cat,
Because all he eats is sweets
And different kind of meats.
Tuesday he had cheese and onion crisps
And told his mum he had nothing to eat
So he got a treat.
Wednesday he sneakily got crisps again, cheese and onion yet again,
He got that flavour but I don't know why.
His mum got Quavers,
His friend gave him a fright late that night
But at least he wasn't a bird
They moved out because of him.

A Monster in My Room by Casey Colebrook (aged 8)

There is a monster in my room
It is as fast as a fox
Scary as a dog
Big as a horse
Funny as a my friend
Small as an ant
Black as a cheetah
Intelligent as a giraffe
I am not scared
I am as brave as a cat.

The Monster by Alieghsha Hodnett (aged 8)

The monster is like a big fluffy tree
The monster is like horrible brown dirt
The monster is like a scary shark
The monster is like a slimy bogy
The monster is like a white cow
The monster has sharp teeth like a shark.

My Monster Bob by Sam Swindles and Melissa Page (aged 8)

My monster has a body like a spiky shark's tooth
Eyes like a bumpy tree
A nose like a pointy ice cream cone
A mouth like an evil witch
And arms like a flat book.

My monster is as friendly as a friend
As clever as a scientist
As loud as a giant
As smelly as a pair of dirty underpants
And as frightening as a zombie.

The Night Before Halloween by Adam Thompson (aged 8)

One night before Halloween,
My monster made a big scream,
I found him hiding in the fridge,
A bird came to see him scream in the middle of a good dream
But once again it was the smoky dain,
For the only wane he could not run because he was sucking his thumb!
Plus he is as tall as a skyscraper!!!

I Found a Smelly Monster by Brandon Swain and Evie Nulty (aged 8)

I found a monster on a scary night,
My monster is as fat as an elephant,
It gave me such a fright
Because he is as big as a fatiphant,
He smells of dog droppings,
He is as sticky as goo,
He jumps like a bunny hopping,
When he jumps in poo.

My Favourite Monster by Olivia Smith (aged 8) and Lilly Webster (aged 9)

Of all the mad monsters my favourite
By far is my pet monster Poppy
Who I found hiding in a car.

She was wet and damp
And tied to the seat
So we paired her up
Me and my fellow flat mate.

We live in a flat not far from were we found
Poppy.

She is as yellow as the sun
And as purple as a plum
And has a big bum.

She is as cute as Olivia
And as silly as Lily
And as fab as Frankie.

She is as clever as my teacher
And as hot as a fire in a beaney.

Frightening Monsters by Emily Roberts (aged 9)

It was a dark, dark night and my monster gave me a fright,
I found him up a tree.
He was talking to a bee,
My monster was wearing his underpants,
And watching TV,
He told me he had children.
In fact three,
I was so relieved that I peed

Monster by Frankie Lamb (aged 9)

It was a snowy night,
And my monster had a big fright,
He saw tiny mini mice,
He was watching them eating rice,
Although you would think,
He would not jump in a sink,
But he did,
Plus he was acting like a kid.

He was still on the sink he got off,
And all the mice ran off.
He was trying to catch them,
But they climbed up a stem,
He turned to me and I gave him a name,
I called him Crying Cane.
So my monster is as whiney as a little baby.
He met his old friend called Mr Nabey.

Monster by Jack Stokes (aged 8)

Of the all the mad monsters
My favourite by far
Is my pet Pikle
Who I found hiding in a car.

He is as tall as a tower.
And he has no brain.
He is as smelly as a sock.
And as fast as a train.

He is as fat as a pig.
He has hair like seaweed.
He is as funny as a clown.
And he likes to read.

He is as stupid as Patrik Star.
He is ten feet tall.
He is as slimy as a slug.
And he can grow big and small.

Mad Monster by Louis Barrow (aged 8)

Of all the mad monsters my favourite by far
is my pet Bob who I found in the car.
His top half is red and his bottom half is green.
His legs are wobbly like jelly.
And he is not nasty or mean.
He is as loud as a Lion.
He is as funny as a clown
and he is happy
and helpful
and he never feels down.

Monster by Owen Morrisey (aged 9)

My monster is as smelly as a skunk
But be careful what you say
Because he turned into a monk
And I sunk
Into depression.

One day I saw my Monster's girlfriend at night
And it gave me a fright
It was a rare sight
And he was a bit bare,

Monster is as ugly as a star nose mole
Even though he doesn't dig a hole.
My monster wanted to go to the moon
And he looked like a loon
And then he ate a spoon.

He dyed his fur and hair orange
And he looked like an Orang-utan
And then he went into a volcano

But somebody said
Are you sure you want to do that?
And I was thinking, Say no
But he said yes and it took him into a land
And there was a lot of sand
He found a key
Then he went for wee
Now you see
It took him to his world far, far away!
I shouldn't say stuff like that
Because he might haunt me.

The Biscuit Eating Monster by Sophie Fisher (aged 8)

One dark night
I saw a monster
And it gave me a fright.
I was as spiky as a hedgehog,
Also I was as smelly as a dump,
My name is Henry,
But people call me Hairy Henry,

My monster is as brown as a Gruffilo,
And hairy also soft like a teddy bear,
Sometimes I swim but when I do I get, very angry like a bear,
My manky monster
Is as hot as a volcano,
But when I get cold I am as cold as an iceberg.
What me and my monster
Love most of all
Is watching each other eat biscuits.

Monster by Caitlin Richards (aged 8)

He is as big as an elephant and as naughty as a dog.
He is as nasty as a bully and as loud as a monkey.
He is as fat as a hippo and as lazy as a lion.
He's as smelly as a fish and as orange as a tiger.
He's as arty as an artist and as ugly as a peace of rotten cheese.

I named my monster Mr Stinky Pypo
He has the most amazing throw
He'd never throw me though
I just know.

Pantoums

Below are lots of poems written as pantoums. But what is a pantoum? See if you can work it out.

Cats by Annie Wier (aged 10)

Their cuteness makes others happy
Catching mice is what they do
Each one is unique and special
Their whiskers are as long as pencils

Catching mice is what they do
They love to cuddle up to you
Their whiskers are as long as pencils
They are always on the move

They love to cuddle up to you
Eating food is their pleasure
They are always on the move
It's surprising what they can do

Eating food is their pleasure
They will love you forever
It's surprising what they can do
Cats are so great, who knew

They will love you forever
Each one is unique and special
Cats are so great, who knew
Their cuteness makes others happy.

Snow by Madison Saam (aged 9)

The first snow has come.
None of the snowflakes are the same
Oh, the snow is so very white
It's zero degrees at night

None of the snowflakes are the same
We're building forts that look like castles
It's zero degrees at night
Brrrr, it's sure cold

We're building forts that look like castles
I got my winter jacket, I'm ready to go
Brrrr, it's sure cold
I taste the fresh falling snow

Oh, the snow is so very white
I got my winter jacket, I'm ready to go!
I taste the fresh falling snow
The first snow has come.

Frogs by Alex Jergerian (aged 9)

Frogs are cool
They are slimy
They like water
They are amphibians

They are slimy
They need to stay wet
They are amphibians
They are hibernators

They need to stay wet
They are not toads!!!
They are hibernators
They have smooth skin

They are not toads!!!
They like water
They have smooth skin
Frogs are cool

War by Logan Lee (aged 9)

Ammo taken from them
Going on for very long
Dead lay everywhere
People dying every second there

Hard to win
Dead lay everywhere
Ammo taken from them
Grasso stealing from the dead

Ammo taken from them
People dying every second there
Grasso stealing from the dead
Going on for very long

Water by Abby Rothstein (aged 10)

Water calm as a reader
Beautiful as sky blue eyes
Dive in to swim
Underwater comes to life

Beautiful as sky blue eyes
Fish dart there and there
Underwater comes to life
Coral big or small

Fish dart there and there
Blue whales huge
Coral big or small
Baby seahorse small as sand

Blue whales huge
Dive in to swim
Baby seahorse small as sand
Water calm as a reader

Puppy by Reilly Werkhoven (aged 10)

The puppy barked
When the door bell rang
We open the door
Far in the room

When the door bell rang
The puppy growled
Far in the room
The guests greeted

The puppy growled
When a cat came in
The guests greeted
More knocks on the door

The puppy barked
When a cat came in
More knocks on the door
We open the door

Horses by Olivia Betters (aged 10)

Very graceful
Most beautiful creatures on earth
A girl's best friend
Very gentle

Most beautiful creatures on earth
Extremely friendly
Very gentle
So ADORABLE!

Extremely friendly
A girl's best friend
So ADORABLE!
Very graceful

Halloween by George Grunklee (aged 9)

Costumes of all kinds
Candy being given out
Spooky decorations
People outdoors

Candy being given out
Darkness in the sky
People outdoors
Zombies everywhere

Darkness in the sky
Ghosts and goblins
Zombies everywhere
Jack o' lanterns lit

Ghosts and goblins
Spooky decorations
Jack o' lanterns lit
Costumes of all kinds

Oireachtas by Annie Wier

Talented dancers everywhere
Girls wearing wigs in their hair
Sparkling dresses shine bright
People praying that they did their dances right

Girls wearing wigs in their hair
People do a lag leap and sour through the air
People praying that they did their dances right
They think about their scores all night

People do a lag leap and sour through the air
Boy dancers click their heels together
They think about their scores all night
I will love the Oireachtas forever

Boy dancers click their heels together
There are stands that have crowns that sparkle
I will love the Oireachtas forever
It's the hopes and dreams of everyone

There are stands that have crowns that sparkle
Sparkling dresses shine bright
It's the hopes and dreams of everyone
Talented dancers everywhere.

Non-fiction by Lizzie Howard (aged 10)

AHHHH,
I'm so bored
This is not interesting!
Sleeping, ya sleeping

I'm so bored
When is it over!?
Sleeping, ya sleeping
REALLY, WHEN IS IT OVER?!!!

When is it over!?
This is not interesting!
REALLY, WHEN IS IT OVER!?
AHHH!

Updated December 7th 2011

Grandpa by Iniva (aged 7)

My Grandpa is great
He can fly across the seas
like roller-skating on trees
He can see the planets
racing around in rackets
So that's why
My Grandpa is so great!!!

My Grandpa is old now
he will be cold here
But he still can
Run around the fields
Like clouds in the sky
But I never know!

The Great Escape by Jake (aged 11)

I walk out the door and up the drive
Ready to go to school then
I freeze; I slowly turn round and realise to my horror
That the door is open!

I drop all my bags and sprint towards the door
I see a wet black wrinkly nose being pushed around the door

Then it retracts and
A brown hairy blur shoots up the drive towards me.
When it sees me it freezes
It gives me the 'butter wouldn't melt' look
Ha, it can't get me with that one

It paws the ground like an angry bull
It charges and takes a flying leap!
I throw myself to intercept it
And
Miss completely.

It lands neatly a couple of metres away
It looks at me with pity then trots off.
I trudge back to the house
Stealing myself for a ten minute verbal beating.

My Tooth by Ella (aged 9)

My tooth fell out today and all I did was scream!
My friend said that a tooth fairy will come, I really hope she isn't mean.
My tooth fell out today and all I did was shout OUCH!!!
Then I sat on the couch.

My tooth fell out yesterday and I got £2.
She wasn't mean and you know how I know?
Well its because it was my
MUM!!!!!

Hundreds and Thousands by Lara (aged 10)

Millions plus billions can equal trillions,
But hundreds and thousands are different.
They can be sprinkled on a cake,
Beside you while you bake,
Or just alone
In the cupboard
On the shelf.
Lonely
Lonely
Lonely.
Lonelier than if you were alone in a field,
Lonelier than if you were the only one to show up for a football match,
Lonelier than if you were the only one inside your house.
But on the other side
They're happy being sprinkled on cakes,
They're happy in the cupboard
With their food friends!

Gremlin World by Cara Scofield (aged 11)

While I was watching TV the power was cut off
I just went to turn it back on when
I slipped and fell into a dark land full of gremlins
The only thing I could see was bright orange gremlins
jumping up and down
And when I looked into their eyes I realized they didn't
have any!
Then I saw a door
I gingerly walked through it
I could see gremlins as black as coal wearing lab coats with
grey hair
With gigantic glasses now I am really worried.

Best Friend by Amy (aged 9)

I want to tell you about a girl, but there's so much to say,
I know that when she's around the fun's not far away,
Always singing and has a smile,
She's my best friend,
I've known her for quite a while,
On her I can depend.
My friend is smart and funny,
My friend's as sweet as honey,
I'm glad I've got a friend so true.
She finds fun round each bend and corner,
Another reason I adore her,
And once you know her you'll be glad you do.

Happy Halloween! by Frannie (aged 9)

Once two kids had a party at Halloween
So they both went to a
Local Tower!
When they got there
There was blood dripping from the ceiling!
They opened a cupboard and inside was a
Skeleton!

The Scary Halloween Shack
by Aiyana Urja Minocha (six and a half)

It was Halloween and I met a fairy who was quite contrary,
She took me to a place which was very,,very scary.
She left me in a dense forest with ghosts everywhere,
They gave me a really big scare.

Suddenly there came a witch who gave me an ear twitch.
We had a dreadful feast which I couldn't stand the least.
She gave me an epic to read so that her magic spell could succeed.

For the witch, things were going well.
She almost had me in her spell.

By chance I saw a feather lying by,
I tickled her nose so she started to cry.
I told the broomstick to make her fly high.
I was free!! And shouted with glee!
The witch screeched, "why, oh why, oh why?!?!?!?!?!?!"

From then I kept a track never to come back!
To that scary creepy Halloween shack.

Our limit for poems is 20 lines - but we are going to make an exception for this...

Alaska the Moose by Lauren Anderson (aged 10)

On a Sunday afternoon, after church was done,
I was riding my bike, in the warm summer sun.

My mom came out the front door and said to me,
"Ella I'm going shopping, won't you come with me?"

I put my bike away and got in the car,
Then we drove to a town that wasn't very far.

When we arrived I saw a huge, giant store,
With a big bright sign that said, Toys, Toys Galore

I asked my mom if we could go in there,
She looked up at the sky and twirled her hair.

Finally she made a decision, and said yes.
I hugged her and said, "Mom your the best!"

What did we see when we walked through the front door?
But board games, and dolls, and a basketball hoop that kept score!

I suddenly looked at something dark brown,
I got on my hands and knees on the ground.

It was a stuffed animal moose!
Sitting next to a stuffed animal goose.

My mom said, "Sure I'll buy it for you."
Since it was only three fifty two.

On the way home in the car,
I made a list of names so far.

I made up names because on the nametag it said Bruce,
And I didn't think it was a fitting name for a moose.

Georgia, Jenna, Nebraska,
Hazel, Amy, and Alaska.
That's it! Her name should be Alaska!

Alaska was with me day and night,
Playing superman with me, or a pilot in flight.

One warm summer day in the sun,
Alaska and I were having great fun.

My mom came out the front door with crackers and cheese,
And said, "Will you eat them with me pretty please?"

She talked while ate,
"Honey, I know you and Alaska's friendship is really great."

"Yes!" I said really speedy,
And then my mom said, "I think it is time to give her to the needy."

I said, "No, no, no with haste!
I would rather have my mouth glued shut with paste."

"Ella I know you don't want to." She said all nice and sweet,
"But, I have an idea that's neat."

"What is it?" I said it brighter this time.
She said, "We put our address on the tag, Four four four four Cherry Lime."

"We'll ask them to send us a letter back,
And we'll stick it on our bulletin board with a tack."

And so, Ella agreed,
And Alaska went around the world with Children in Need.

She went to Maria in Nigeria,
And to Jonathan in Switzerland.

But, don't forget Millie in Chile.
The letters kept coming year by year,
And each of them reminded Ella of Alaska's great cheer.

Updated November 11th 2011

Storm by Eamon Smith (aged 10)

Storm clouds up the sky
Torrents down dripping as rain
Off oak trees

Angel Castle by Chloe Cowley (aged 10)

We didn't see angels
in Angel castle
but we knew
they were here

I saw a feather
different from all the others
floating down from angel castle

I heard them flying
wings white as snow
we didn't see
but we knew

I found a stone
belonging to an important angel
If it shattered then so would they
they would be gone
and so would we

we didn't see angels
in angel castle
but they saw us...

A Cat Sat on a… by Marnie (aged 8)

A cat sat on a bee
And said aaeooee!
A dog sat on a cat
And a hen sat on an egg

Stranger by Holly Marriott (aged 10)

A secret small stranger
who flutters and spies.
She watches over girls and boys
with her kind,loving eyes.

She comes with a spellbound locket
which she uses to sprinkle love all around the world.
Her scales the colours of the rainbows,
she can soar like a loving, smooth dove.

Markers by Kira Gish (aged 11)

Nothing is permanent but markers.
Not the best friend to whom your secrets hold,
Not the love that seems forever,
Not even the vows you swore.
So many things we wish were permanent
Hello, this is. I'm 10 years old and this is my poem.

I Remember the Glass-Bottomed Boat
by Sinéad Corbett (aged 10)

I remember the glass-bottomed boat
Sailing out from the shore of North Island
And into the bay

I remember the sight of tiny fish
Swimming and wriggling their way past the hull
Searching for places to hide

I remember the bright colours of the coral
The exotic creatures native to the sea
Down there in the shimmering blue ocean

I remember seeing what I thought were sharks
But were actually dolphins
One even jumped out of the water
In an acrobatic display

I remember being disappointed
When they disappeared

God of the Ocean by Joseph Packham (aged 8)

The heat of the sun lazily lays upon my back
The smell of salt drifts to my nose
I can feel the sand between my toes

CRASH!!!

The waves aggressively devoured the saffron sand
Waves re-emerge to the ocean's hand
And decided to join the ocean band

Cowboy by Madhumanti Dey (aged 8)

Have you ever seen a cowboy?
Have you seen one?
He yodels in the rain
and yodels in the sun.
He has a big farm
and a big barn.
He has a sheep,
and has a horse.
A horse who does no harm.

My Shadow by Ellie Bond (aged 10)

My shadow is a silly thing that follows me everywhere
I look around and there it is, I look again it's still there

My shadow makes me think about my friends
Following me everywhere

And in the park I rush to the swing, my shadow does too
I play hide and seek but I always find my shadow first
My friends ask me round to tea, I say no I can't, I have got to play with my shadow

At bed time when I read my book I always see my shadow taking a look
I love my shadow copying me but sometimes I have a sneaky peak at his.

Then in my dream I am scared but I always have my shadow prepared
For my scary dreams and happy dreams.
I wonder what my shadow does when I am in bed
I don't think he is a sleepy head.

But I love my shadow the way he is

The Impressionist by Nanthu Gk

He sways his mouth, he swings his hand.
Many would remember a puppet show.
His booming voice loud and clear
decorated with high and low pitches.
Dressed smart with polished shoes,
the tie adds to the glamour.
What he teaches is hard to erase
be it a lesson or advice.
He makes us laugh, he makes us cry
the happy remains while sad flies away.
His high demeanour stays with us
even after school, throughout our life.
My English teacher you may never know
but there is no doubt
he is the best teacher I ever had.

Updated 25th Oct 2011

Charities by Charlize Spriggs (aged 10)

There is a boy in the wild
He hunts every day
How would you feel
If you had to live this way?

Help him

There is a girl in India
And she deserves much more
Because she has to do her chores
In her family that's poor

Help her

There is a family in Africa
And the drought there led
To drinking horrid water
Just to escape the dead

Help them

So save up all your money
And, all you readers, please
We could save a thousand lives
If we gave to charities

Save them

Kate Perry by Eloise Williams (age 10)

Katy Perry is a violin
Her voice is as quite and high pitched
She is as delicate as a volin
And she's always breaking strings
Golden records too

When I play her T
The E sounds good
but the K and A sound good
but not that good

Tired Lion by Savannah Hack (aged 7)

Tired lion in the grass
Wouldn't give much advance
With broken trees and stumpy logs
Wouldn't hurt little frogs.
Old deer and beaten up bees
And a quiet place full of trees.
Tired lion in the grass
Get up and show some advance
Don't be lazy, don't be crazy
Bits of wood stuck in trees
Carved like Japanese.

The Mystery Man by Lily (aged 9)

The mystery man,
Drove off in his bright black van,
He had prickly yellow scars all over him,
And his nickname was "Black-Eyed Tim".

The mystery man,
Had a raspberry-red tan,
His spiky styled was like an electric ray,
He would drive in his van,
From June back to May.

The mystery man,
Vanished!
And was never seen again!

My Friend by Chloe Crittenden (aged 10)

My friend is a bulldozer
She budges everyone out of her way.
I tried once.
But she just groaned and shoved me out of her way!
When you look at her
Her eyes are shining and gleaming at you.
Her body is fat and ...
chunky like an elephant.
She is as slow as a slug.
But I'm telling you - don't get in her way!!!
She is UNSTOPPABLE !!

What I Will Put Inside My Box by Miriam Al-Hadithi (aged 8)

I will put inside my box fairies flying all around
In my box I will put me and my friends and family
playing in endless summer
I will put inside my box me and my brothers giggling and
playing together
I will put a kiss for my mum and dad
I will sleep in my box
I will put in my box pictures when I was a baby and smiling
In my box I will put my first birthday

Dolphins by Janaki O'Callaghan (aged 8)

Dolphins swim here and there,
Dolphins swim everywhere.

Some are tall some are small,
Some even play with a bouncy ball.

Dolphins are warm-blooded, aren't we all?
And the way they communicate, what a lovely call.

Sometimes they jump, some times they splash,
But into each other they never crash.

Their tricks are amazing because they rehearse,
When I see them I think what a wonderful universe!

Happiness by Olivia Heckford (aged 10)

Happiness is hot chocolate running down your throat.
Happiness is seeing family once again
Happiness is the scent of fresh bread
Happiness is a big hug from a loved one
Happiness is waking up on Christmas day.

The Winter Fire by Danielle. J. Holland (aged 10)

The fire slowly glows
Then rapidly fiery rings burn huge holes in the paper
And the coal inside shoots up into flames
And the grey gloomy smoke goes up the chimney
The fire backs down and hides under the coal
The paper is now in shreds
And with more paper and coal it will soon start again

Spicy Ice Cream World by Jordan Whelan (aged 10)

I fell through a freezer on my way to school
And found myself in a land full of ice creams.
Some of them were spicy,
Some of them were sour,
A few of them were salty but most of them were sprinkly.
I saw a mermaid looking flake shimmering murky curry sauce
river
Whilst steel guitars played blind-man's bluff with custard
pies.
I don't think I was quite asleep but it's so hard to believe
for nothing is quite what it seems in the land called Spicy
Ice Cream World.

Fantastic Facts by Rosie Birch (aged 10)

Geese,
in Greece
like peace.

In Kent,
People sent
Blue and yellow tents.

Planes
In Spain
Don't fly in rain.

Cows with the flu
In Peru,
Go achu!

People in France
dance with
A chance.

Betrayal by Konstantinos Schoinas (aged 10)

Betrayal is as malevolent as the colour red
Betrayal is a gloomy old alleyway
Betrayal is old, expired and dry milk dripping out a carton
Betrayal is the smell of rotting garbage
Betrayal is an empty black hole

My Sister is a Bomb by Mary Heather (aged 10)

She goes of very easily
She's always making annoying whistling sounds
She never wants to talk
Her eyes are a string of fire
She falls to the ground with an earth-shaking thud
She's as blind as a bat
I love her for how she is
But now I'm history!

The Volcano by Thomas Startup (aged 10)

I am the strongest volcano ever formed,
My tears are the big rocky pots of bubbling fiery hot lava,
The quickly launched ash is my red hot hair,
My eyes are the enormous boulders on the side of my rocky body,
My breath is the black-out dust and ash cloud falling and spreading and destroying millions of innocent lives,
Prepare to burn, for my heat is irresistible!
My arms are the sticks and twigs native Americans throw at me so that I don't destroy them!
My legs are just the rock at the bottom of my hard rocky base,
Prepare to be burnt, for my lava tears of lava are
scolding hot,
Please do not under-estimate me because i will destroy you.
Prepare to burn, for my heat is irresistible!

Nanny Nu Nu by Joe Humphries

On my way to football I fell into my football boots,
And found myself in a land of sweet houses and liquorice
trees that walk.
I saw a marshmallow train run over a helpless gummy bear
I saw a strawberry dog bite a jelly baby postman.
I saw a dolly mixture gang whipping the Haribo kid with liquorice string
I saw a flying saucer hitting a chocolate monkey.

Chocolate by Rizwan Sadiq (aged 10)

I fell through an ancient shotgun on my way home,
I found myself in a land full of chocolate guns, birds and houses.
Some were rusty,
Some were chocolate wool, but most of them were red.
The birds were rapidly sprinting across the chocolate
surface.
The guns were swiftly gliding across the chocolate air.
The houses were gingerly marching across bumpy chocolate.
I didn't think I was dead but it was extremely exhausting to come back to life.

The Cloakroom by D.J. Holland (aged 10)

Oh god, I forgot my coat from school
It's not my fault when the first aid lady
sends two people out to pick up all those coats
Yours is never were you left it
And then they send you out late
I can't find my coat

My Sister by Courtney Hall (aged 10)

My sister is a tank she sees with her turret she talks with her guns
She hits everything that goes in her field
Nothing can stop her
My bother tried once
And now he as burnt as a cinder
Her wheels are as heavy as a dinosaur.

The Lethal Sea by Xavier Harvey (aged 10)

I can overturn the cargo
Or carry the dainty yacht
I can save the Admiral's navy crew
Or crush the entire lot
I hold deep dark secrets
In my malevolent depths
But one more thing you should know
Before you've truly left
You humans should stop coming into my domain
And desperately try to flee
Should I have mercy on your kind?
I AM THE
LETHAL
SEA

Staff Room Poem by Sophie Carter (aged 10)

I fell through a book on my way to bed.
I got up and I saw hundreds of angry teachers glaring at me and mumbling.
Some of them where red teachers
and some of them where fat teachers
but most where nice and helpful teachers.

I saw a green pen in an green hand,
while the blue teachers played sevens with the dictionaries.
I could smell the coffee from the other side of the book.
I could taste the black coal dust of the chalk board.
I heard my name being called and all of a sudden I was in my bed...

Leaf Trap by Luke Stemp (aged 10)

I fell through a leaf trap on my way to football club and found myself in a marvellous land full of gummy bears.
Some of them were massive and some of them were colourful
And some of them were bright.
Then I saw bacon shimmering in the colourful red sky
While I played blind-man's buff with footballs
Then I started to run through the jungle
And monkeys were following me everywhere
And I fell through the leaf trap again and found myself on the football pitch.

Death Comes by Liam Robertson (aged 10)

Darkness closes in on me.
Death comes.
Death comes.
I wail out
But no one is left to hear my agonized cries.
It engulfs me like a shadow in the night.
I see his dark hooded face,
Shadowed by his black-hearted hunger.
He's coming for me ...

Strange Day by Lauren Hocking (aged 10)

I fell through a mirror on my way to school,
And found myself in a land that was full of bubble gums.
Some of them were fish-shaped and some were pig-shaped,
A few of them were curry flavoured but most of them were chilli flavoured,
I saw the fish-shaped shimmering in the murky mud,
While the pig-shaped ones were playing blind-man's bluff with square-shaped Bubble gum,
I don't think I was dreaming but it was so hard to believe,
For nothing is quite what it seems in the land of bubble dreams.

The Magpie's Cloud by Jessica Leigh (aged 10)

On the way to the park, I saw one magpie, as I got closer,
The magpie grew bigger, and wouldn't stop,
Until it was the size of a full-grown Labrador,
But before I could take one more step,
I got gobbled up, without being chewed (thankfully!)

I soon woke up and found myself floating,
On a green, fluffy cloud, surrounded by magpies!

Some magpies were slim, some were fat, some looked evil,
But most of them were strolling around on one leg,
Eating a packet of jelly babies!

I didn't know were I was, or how I got there,
But one thing I did know, everything is strange ,on the
magpie's cloud!

The Slush Puppy Land by Callum Pulham (aged 10)

I fell through a black hole on my way to school
And I found myself in a land fall of slush puppies
Some of them were red and blue
But most of them were multi coloured
And put together
I saw an enormous one shimmering in the murky floors
While slush puppies played blind-man's bluff with drinking
different.

Death by Caitlyn Towsey (aged 10)

Death came lonely to the grave yard.
Slowly lifting his grinning face.
Waiting to suck all the red juicy blood out of the dead
person.
Death did not talk in case he woke the people up
in the house right next to the dark, scared, lonely grave yard...
Then just as Death finished sucking all the blood out it was morning and Death very, very gingerly
and as speedily as he could, disappeared…

Harribo Mix by Ellie Laming (aged 11)

I fell through a freezer on my way to school
And found myself in a land of Harribo Mix
Some of the were chewy some of them were spicy
A few of them were salty but most of them were juicy
I saw a gummy bear floating in a river of jelly snakes
Whilst gummy bears sing twinkle little star with apple pies
I don't think I was dreaming this but it is so hard to believe
For nothing is quite what it seems In the land of Harribo Mix

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